Wednesday, September 2, 2015


Today we looked at blogs. They were all great. I can't wait to start blogging!!!! The End.

1 comment:

  1. The writing is too short and lacks information. There are no details.
    The picture (visual) doesn't explain anything, or connect to the idea.
    Word choice is poor, doesn't paint a picture in my mind.
    Punctuation - only one exclamation mark. Your audience won't understand, because they don't know my personality and humor.
    Act professional - visual, word choice, font choice, punctuation.