The writing is too short and lacks information. There are no details. The picture (visual) doesn't explain anything, or connect to the idea. Word choice is poor, doesn't paint a picture in my mind. Punctuation - only one exclamation mark. Your audience won't understand, because they don't know my personality and humor. Act professional - visual, word choice, font choice, punctuation.
The writing is too short and lacks information. There are no details.
ReplyDeleteThe picture (visual) doesn't explain anything, or connect to the idea.
Word choice is poor, doesn't paint a picture in my mind.
Punctuation - only one exclamation mark. Your audience won't understand, because they don't know my personality and humor.
Act professional - visual, word choice, font choice, punctuation.